This Earth (Short Story)

This Earth (Short Story)

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sophieex4 By sophieex4 Completed

A girl discovers the secrets of this world and is given the task to save it with help from mother earth brother sun and sister moon.

  • earth
  • girl
  • help
  • love
  • mother
  • mystery
  • save
AnnabethChase12345 AnnabethChase12345 Apr 02, 2014
This is interesting. Your writing style is great and the story is very enjoyable.
irchogg irchogg Mar 09, 2011
A very interesting start! It grips the reader quite well and description is great! I look forward to seeing how this goes :D
                              Keep going xD
                              
                              P.S If you have time, would you mind reading my stuff and comment etc? ta :)