A girl discovers the secrets of this world and is given the task to save it with help from mother earth brother sun and sister moon.
This is interesting. Your writing style is great and the story is very enjoyable.
A very interesting start! It grips the reader quite well and description is great! I look forward to seeing how this goes :D
Keep going xD
P.S If you have time, would you mind reading my stuff and comment etc? ta :)