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This Earth (Short Story)

This Earth (Short Story)

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sophieex4 By sophieex4 Completed

A girl discovers the secrets of this world and is given the task to save it with help from mother earth brother sun and sister moon.

AnnabethChase12345 AnnabethChase12345 Apr 02, 2014
This is interesting. Your writing style is great and the story is very enjoyable.
irchogg irchogg Mar 09, 2011
A very interesting start! It grips the reader quite well and description is great! I look forward to seeing how this goes :D
                              Keep going xD
                              P.S If you have time, would you mind reading my stuff and comment etc? ta :)