Why Me...?

Why Me...?

22.6K Reads 284 Votes 10 Part Story
Cuutiee By Cuutiee Updated Jul 16, 2011

What will happen when Rachel who has been in foster care all her life has her teacher (who is actually a powerfull alpha) decide shes his mate? And then there is the rival clan!?! Will the truce hold, or will old grudges be too much? Will the rival clan's alpha be able to resist Rachel? Will Rachel ever find a place where she belongs?

Cuutiee Cuutiee Mar 13, 2011
@angeluvr4216 sorry, the story is already happening, too late to change it
angelheaven101 angelheaven101 Mar 12, 2011
a really, really good start especially since this is your first story. THe only thing I can suggest are going over a few pronoun rules. Tricky pricks. LOL! On to the next chapter. 
Cuutiee Cuutiee Mar 11, 2011
@meena79 well mainly she felt like a whore for making out with her teacher but ya he also kinda scared her. she didnt know what he meant and she didnt want to belong to somebody.
meena79 meena79 Mar 10, 2011
what a good start, maybe space out the writting a bit to make it easier to read
IWasLikeWhoopWhoop IWasLikeWhoopWhoop Mar 08, 2011
im hoping youll be done with homework soon??? loved it!!!!! cause she has the same name as me!!!! ahhhhh!!!!!! its kinda creepy though....oh well. :)
Cuutiee Cuutiee Mar 07, 2011
@blahsydney im posting the next one either tonight or tomorrow afternoon :) vote and comment everyone please!