Holding on for Kevin (and other contest entries)

Holding on for Kevin (and other contest entries)

253 Reads 48 Votes 3 Part Story
Nicholas Fewell By NicholasFewell Completed

Written for flashfic drabble contest. A Drabble is a story that is exactly 100 words long. The theme was beginnings and ends. Other stories for flashfic challenges will be posted here as well.

  • birth
  • death
  • drabble
  • flashfiction
  • sad
kadauhara99 kadauhara99 Sep 19, 2018
I love the phrase -- her mind broke -- I can picture it so clearly.
NeonSunset NeonSunset Dec 27, 2018
We all knew she should have picked up that damn phone.
                              The foreshadowing was done immaculately
gnosticpomegranate gnosticpomegranate Oct 14, 2018
Oh that last line. Very effective use of drabble/flash fiction form.
CatherineMicqu CatherineMicqu Sep 10, 2018
This hit right home. My mother in law died two days before my daughter was born... Well done. It is short but I like the style.