Repairing Mistakes. (Completed)

Repairing Mistakes. (Completed)

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Jewel By CoDZombieSLayer94 Completed

Ceria Thurman wants to be a photographer. When she finally get's the chance she takes it. Her boyfriend goes with her on a trip to Asia. A trip that will change Ceria's life forever. But when a tragic accident occurs Ceria's boyfriend Raymond is on his own. What Raymond doesn't know is Ceria is desperately trying to repair her past mistakes before time runs out. A book written by Purpledotgrl also the same girl as nastasiajem.

foxifae foxifae Jun 08, 2011
I liked the voice and the flow. You just need to work on your speech punctuation and capitalisation. :) xx