One Night Love Affair *COMPLETED*

One Night Love Affair *COMPLETED*

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lucyjane_wonderland By lucyjane_wonderland Completed

Lana Jones works hard to be able to survive on her own. She prouds on never giving up and her moral integrity. But when Ian McCain offers her three million dollars for one night of her time, she swallows her pride and accepts his offer. 
That's when she realizes, she won't even spend the night with Ian, but in the company of one and only James Cornell, a spoiled trust-fond kid. She read and heard he was good looking and charming, but nothing could prepare her for the real James.

When James meets Lana, he has no idea she was bought and paid for to spend the night with him. He's instantly smitten with her and sparks fly. One drink turns into diner, which turns into a impromptu date, which they end in bed. When James wakes up next night Lana is gone.

Six years passes by when James and Lana bump into each other again. Can they work things out, or will the past tear them apart once again?

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I've been away for a really long time, and when I read what I've written I decided I want to change it a bit, so things are more clear and the story will move on more naturally... I did fish the story, but there are mistakes to it which I want to resolve. Anyhow for the time being, I will leave this story here, and work on the new and improved version on my computer.

peaches4747 peaches4747 Nov 25
12 inch heels? Do they even make those? No one could walk in them ,
infinitywordlover infinitywordlover Nov 01, 2014
This is really cool! The concept of paying to like buy dates is not new, but I have found that no author really has faced it head-on, because well it's kind of weird. But your detail is great.
theinfinitebird theinfinitebird Oct 29, 2014
Your descriptions are really good and I like how she talks to herself :) I did notice a few grammatical errors but you've done well seeing as English is your second language. 
                              
                              Good start, I'm liking your writing style.
FernRisher FernRisher Oct 28, 2014
OMG! As I thought when you first mentioned Julia Roberts' name, PRETTY WOMAN! Ugh! And Richard Gere! I love the movie... Anyways, my love for the movie is as much as how I love your first chapter! :D Keep it up!
Gxlden_Jewel Gxlden_Jewel Oct 25, 2014
This chapter is really captivating and intriguing! 
                              
                              Minimal grammar errors..no biggie. Awesome description and great use of characterization!
                              
                              Keep it up!
krissyluvsyou krissyluvsyou Oct 21, 2014
Wow, this story sounds interesting to begin with. If with English as your second language, your grammar is better than most people on here haha!