The Shadow's Secrets

The Shadow's Secrets

672 Reads 22 Votes 4 Part Story
brightnight1310 By brightnight1310 Updated Mar 29, 2011

This is a story about a young 15 year old girl named Crystal. This young warrior is woke up with no recollection of where or who she is. She faces many obstacles through her journey as she tries to remember who she is and who she can trust and fall in love with...? Does she wanna know what she has done in the past and what an extraordinary girl she really is? Who can she really trust?

brightnight1310 brightnight1310 May 01, 2011
@ShannonDouglas  Thanx so much for votting and thanx!
                              
                               @nightfall_fairy i will do my best  and haha awesome poetry u got there(:
ShannonFawkes ShannonFawkes May 01, 2011
A really strong start, great description and imagery :)
                               keep writing!
                              *voted*
brightnight1310 brightnight1310 Apr 01, 2011
@treehugger11 thanx! I REALLY appreciated the vote and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story:)
treehugger11 treehugger11 Mar 30, 2011
This is really good, captures the reader and keeps them interested. And I really love that this doesnt feel like everyother story it feels unique. :D *voted*
joapo56 joapo56 Mar 29, 2011
this was pretty good, and there was a lot of detail and you described the character well;
                              good job and keep writing :)
brightnight1310 brightnight1310 Mar 29, 2011
@octoberiswild thanx! Ur votes are appreciated, I hope u enjoy the rest of the story:)