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My Everything

My Everything

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arokay By arokay Completed

A Saturday night in with your girl.. – Wait I wouldn't call her my girl. Its something more than that.. I’m engaged to Jasmine, she’s my fiancée. It’s been a few months since I proposed. The thing is I can’t decide whether I really am deeply in love with her. Am I..? We lied down together on the leather seats with her head resting on my chest. I fixed my eyes on the screen watching Take Me Out. One of those shows for women seeking lovers, Jasmine got me hooked and interested in it. The presenter stopped at a woman asking her about what type of guy she likes. I studied her face, it looked so familiar. I’m sure I have met her in my life before. I remember that face, I can never forget it. “Breanna Carter, are you ready?” The presenter spoke. Did I just hear Breanna? My mind didn’t register what he just said properly, I jumped up accidentally flopping Jasmine onto the side of the couch,  I grabbed the remote pressing rewind with frustration. “Breanna Carter, are you ready?” My mouth hung in utter shock. Breanna Carter, I remember her.. how can I forget her? She is My Everything.

arokay arokay Sep 01, 2011
@lerok07 @Robert911 Thank you ;D' so I didn't do that bad at a first attempt? :-)
lerok07 lerok07 Sep 01, 2011
WOW. Perfect amount of information and perfect information it self. This begining really gets you interested!