a story about a teen age emo boy moving to a mysterious boarding school.
i was kind of confuse because of the spacing but as far as the story goes its interesting ^^
This is interesting just divide the pragraphs don't make them too long... voted!
Spacing is a little overwhelming but that certainly did not distract me! It felt a little rushed but I love the whole rebel boy, boarding school thing. I know Veiwnix was sent to a boarding school but I wonder if any previous events triggers the cutting? Voted! COmmented! Check out mine?
I agree with Poison4heart and Violetpaso.
You need to space out your paragraphs, cause they put me off sometimes.
Anyways, I did manage to read it and it's good (= voted
I agree with Poison4heart,
the large paragraphs can sometimes be a turn-off for readers. Just space them out and you're fine!
Fine but the zombies have to be dancing with Michel Jackson to the song thriller.