Boarding school mayhem

Boarding school mayhem

1.4K Reads 27 Votes 4 Part Story
Neelix By 7Seven7 Updated Apr 27, 2011

a story about a teen age emo boy moving to a mysterious boarding school.

AnotherNonsense AnotherNonsense May 13, 2011
i was kind of confuse because of the spacing but as far as the story goes its interesting ^^ 
Confiantexetxbelle Confiantexetxbelle May 12, 2011
This is interesting just divide the pragraphs don't make them too long... voted!
beachside beachside May 02, 2011
Spacing is a little overwhelming but that certainly did not distract me! It felt a little rushed but I love the whole rebel boy, boarding school thing. I know Veiwnix was sent to a boarding school but I wonder if any previous events triggers the cutting? Voted! COmmented! Check out mine?
s_babydoll s_babydoll Apr 23, 2011
I agree with Poison4heart and Violetpaso. 
                              You need to space out your paragraphs, cause they put me off sometimes.
                              Anyways, I did manage to read it and it's good (= voted
Violetpaso Violetpaso Apr 22, 2011
I agree with Poison4heart,
                              the large paragraphs can sometimes be a turn-off for readers. Just space them out and you're fine!
mrdr1350 mrdr1350 Mar 16, 2011
Fine but the zombies have to be dancing with Michel Jackson to the song thriller.