This is the sequel to I FAKE THAT SMILE, Sheena and Damon has been through so much, can things possibly get any worse?? read on to find out more! Entered for the Special Award!
how can it be the sequel to i fake that smile if its called i fake that smile? :)
great book..cant put it down....hope you get to upload a few more pages...
@AzureAdams They are very hard to find :( I had one but unfortunately she cant do it any more as she is too busy
You really need an editor and a better outline for the story. There are too many 'wild' turns that don't make sense and the characterisations are not very strong and they keep changing dimension. Get yourself an editor! All good writers have them and it shows because their work is good.
@nannysusie lol I'm writing now as i want to try and keep ahead a little with this one :)
@iloveahappyending Aww Thanks :) Well here we go I'm uploading it now!! I'm sooo nervous it feels like a first day at school lmao I really hope you al;l like :( so worried lol