I Sat On A Killer (BEN Drowned FanFic)

I Sat On A Killer (BEN Drowned FanFic)

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can you really hear me? By canyouheremenow Completed

What if you ran around wearing the last gift your uncle gave you, your single dad falls in love with a strange black-haired chick, and your bff's brother keeps scaring the poop out of you? Add a creepy stalker that trips you the first time you see him and you have the life of Zoandra Holliman! What would you do? What will she do? Well, my darling bunni, read on to find out.

 WARNING: This is my first story!!! Please be kind. Helpful criticism is ok, but don't just go on reading and hating on every chapter! Thank you for taking the time to even read this far, it means more than you think!

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TateHarmon TateHarmon Jul 23
That face adds more character xD it's hilarious! I love it when authors do that
Careful, your character looks mary sue. Beware of the haters you will inevitably get for that.
bitchy_meh bitchy_meh 19 hours ago
What else can she suck?(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
                              
                              
                              I am SO sorry for this comment X
Careful, your character looks mary sue. Beware of the haters you will inevitably get for that.
Pretty good start. Some people may get upset with her appearance though, since it would be considered "Mary Sue" (Why? NATURAL silver highlights. That just doesnt happen. And heterochima eyed are incredibly rare, so a few people will find that annoying)