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The asylum

The asylum

24.5K Reads 313 Votes 21 Part Story
Barney... why not By thebreathdies Completed

Have you ever felt so alone. So afraid. So angry.... that they came. The little person inside you which was going to make you do terrible things. Your fears are all written down. Your hopes are all gone. Your person is taking revenge. And his name is Crow.....

I have been waiting for something this intriguing for a long time, I will use this tactic in my own writing. Thank you for showing an example!
My Form:
                              N: shadow
                              A:18
                              Se:straight ((but if you want bi))
                              Sp:half demon half angel
                              Why their here: she had killed and eaten people in her past
                              Crush: open
                               ((If shut is allowed:))
                              Turn ons: getting pinned and touched and kissed and licked 
                              Turn offs: being on top and getting hurt
FramedAsTheInnocent FramedAsTheInnocent Jul 22, 2016
Callums part was simply lovely. This was fun to read. I will definitely stick around for more.
thebreathdies thebreathdies Apr 03, 2011
@XxTallahaseeTwinkyxX I know I love that film and the photo fits with the story so YEY! :-)
kristinekontagious kristinekontagious Mar 09, 2011
this is really super good!
                              
                              but I just wanna note, tere was 333 reads so far.. which is half 666. is there not coincidence my read made 333?
JaniClayson JaniClayson Mar 09, 2011
I agree with the other comments: dark, edgy and different. I really liked this!