Who Said The Future Would Be Bright?

Who Said The Future Would Be Bright?

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Amelia~ By Ladyly Completed

Skye and Niomi used to be care-free. They used to think that the they could get away with anything and everything, that they could do whatever they wanted and that it was them against the world. But when they meet Harizen in the future world ruled by the Malumi and their leader, they soon realise that this authority it bites back ...
Who Said The Future Would Be Bright?

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AdriMarie AdriMarie Aug 15, 2011
I reallly like your characters, and your detailing. your writing also flows pretty well! great jobb
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Ladyly Ladyly Aug 14, 2011
@leigh_ LOL thank you so so much!! :3 :3 I'm glad you like it :)
                              
                              Yeah, I'm going to be doing a revised version later on. So that's good. :D
                              
                              And I LOVE YOUR ULTRA-LONG COMMENT!! XDXDXD
Ladyly Ladyly Aug 14, 2011
@CatInTheHat57 LOL, thank you :3 <3 Yeah, I know, I should change some of that. XD Thank you again! :)
realityxfantasy realityxfantasy Aug 14, 2011
You have great grammar! :) I think you should add a few more details here and there, but otherwise, great job! :)
Ladyly Ladyly Jul 07, 2011
@ASBehsam Aww, thankies :3
                              LOL, no it's not ;) XD But I might XD
ASB-RandomWriting ASB-RandomWriting Jul 06, 2011
great work, dear, :)
                              and might I suggest you prepare the audio book as well as you write this?! ;)
                              your voice is so nice,, :)