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9.5K Reads 128 Votes 8 Part Story
emerald0011 By emerald0011 Updated Jun 01, 2011

Emerald isnt normal. well she might think she is.. but she hasn't got a clue.
She can see things that the normal eye misses. Her greatest talent is kicking people's butts in spot the difference. But things in her life are about to change in her life.. and she's gotta see that change and keep up with it.. before its too late.

MistressOfFantasy MistressOfFantasy May 29, 2011
Way to ramp up the suspence, emerald0011. I like it, but your spelling glitches tick me off.
                              *Voted*
emerald0011 emerald0011 Mar 29, 2011
@RainbowGirlx =) i am hope u can read the later chapter ^^
                              thanks for reading
                              xx
InMySweetDreams InMySweetDreams Mar 13, 2011
@emerald0011 
                              You're welcome. :)
                              Yes, I understand. This is probably just a first draft, after all. 
                              This is not bad for a first timer! Just keep writing and you can only improve. :)
                              And yes, YA does mean young adult.
                              Happy writings and good luck!
emerald0011 emerald0011 Mar 12, 2011
@ness_yv  thanks youu and for fanning as well i realised you did making it ten!! woo 
                              <3
emerald0011 emerald0011 Mar 11, 2011
@thelionftw 
                              
                              yea keeping to one tense is a lot harder when its present >.>
                              thank you though ^^
thelionftw thelionftw Mar 11, 2011
It's a good start. Just some sentences that need work. And remember to keep to one tense. I have that problem too haha. But it's pretty good.