The lost twin (host club)

The lost twin (host club)

19.6K Reads 606 Votes 12 Part Story
Nattaya21 By Nattaya21 Completed

This story is about two twins named hikaru and kaoru. Kaoru(the younger twin) is depressed why you ask because he has a terrible nightmare about haruhi Fujioka and because of his older twin brother hikaru. Hikaru walks down a path of romance with haruhi and leaves his twin behind, but hikaru doesn't know that his twin brother has strong feelings for him. Will kaoru express his love to hikaru or will hikaru leave kaoru behind?

  • awesome
  • fanfiction
  • hitachiin
  • hostclub
  • romance
  • surprising
  • twins
aobaxnoizxclear aobaxnoizxclear May 21, 2017
Me and my twin are like Kao chan and Hika chan just no incest
Can we please stop with the Haruhi is the villain thing? 🙄
EliTheArch EliTheArch Aug 30, 2017
Me: Help Hunny~Senpai is mad cause I used his last reviving pill I need someone to hide me and roast Haruhi right now bye
                              Hunny~Senpai: Get over here Eli~chan no one hurts Haru~Chan and uses my revival pills 
                              Me: Im sorry Hunny~Senp-* Is knocked out Mori
                              Hunny~Senpai: Thanks Mori~Chan
EliTheArch EliTheArch Aug 30, 2017
Me: *Picks up Knife* Haruhi as much as I love you NO ONE HURTS MY KAORU *Stabs Haruhi* Bye bye
                              Haruhi: What happened I was with (Insert girl manager name I forgot) *Dies*
                              Me: Nowwww Myyyyyy Shipppppp willlllll never sail why why (I do ship them its cuz I rewatched it a year ago so eh bye)
_Adhafera_ _Adhafera_ Sep 27, 2017
First chapter and I'm already cringing at the grammar.
                               Where are all the commas? For example in that long sentence said by Haruhi.
                              There is no such a thing as should of, it's should have.
                              Lines missing capital letters. 
                              I think I'll try one more chapter and see if this is worth reading.
Audrey17889 Audrey17889 Jul 07, 2017
Ahem* Go hug a cactus Haruhi Come here kaoru *Pats his head*