The Untruthful Ways [ON HOLD]

The Untruthful Ways [ON HOLD]

738 Reads 9 Votes 18 Part Story
popcorn burning By ThatKindofMature Updated Jun 15, 2012

Jamie Foxington had a normal life. Until Terence arrived and changes her life. While another stranger stalks her? Hmmm. Well, maybe you should read it and find out.

ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature May 27, 2011
@hopefulromantic 
                              Thank you for he feedback! 
                              I know what to improve now, and what I need to fix. 
                              This story is ending at twenty chapters. 
                              Can you give me more feedback on my others? If so, thank you:)
ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature Apr 30, 2011
Thank you. i have an A in english, that's probably why., but I already know it, it's like in my blood. 
                              Anyway, thank you :)
xRadioRebelx xRadioRebelx Apr 30, 2011
This is AWESOME! I really like it. :D Your grammar is good & I like how you use emphasis! :) You're imagination is also great! 8)
                              
                              Added to library, fanned, voted & liked! ^_^
                              
                              Happy Writings! <333
ACRL37 ACRL37 Apr 29, 2011
it's a nice first chapter, but maybe use a little more description in the future. also, be careful of grammatical errors, but it's still pretty good 
ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature Apr 29, 2011
Thanks you guys! I will most definitely read yours. 
                              And fan :)
ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature Mar 06, 2011
@iamJez
                              It gets weirder:)
                              Just wait til Luke the middle of the story:)