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The Untruthful Ways [ON HOLD]

The Untruthful Ways [ON HOLD]

738 Reads 9 Votes 18 Part Story
popcorn burning By ThatKindofMature Updated Jun 15, 2012

Jamie Foxington had a normal life. Until Terence arrived and changes her life. While another stranger stalks her? Hmmm. Well, maybe you should read it and find out.

ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature May 27, 2011
                              Thank you for he feedback! 
                              I know what to improve now, and what I need to fix. 
                              This story is ending at twenty chapters. 
                              Can you give me more feedback on my others? If so, thank you:)
ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature Apr 30, 2011
Thank you. i have an A in english, that's probably why., but I already know it, it's like in my blood. 
                              Anyway, thank you :)
xRadioRebelx xRadioRebelx Apr 30, 2011
This is AWESOME! I really like it. :D Your grammar is good & I like how you use emphasis! :) You're imagination is also great! 8)
                              Added to library, fanned, voted & liked! ^_^
                              Happy Writings! <333
ACRL37 ACRL37 Apr 29, 2011
it's a nice first chapter, but maybe use a little more description in the future. also, be careful of grammatical errors, but it's still pretty good 
ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature Apr 29, 2011
Thanks you guys! I will most definitely read yours. 
                              And fan :)
ThatKindofMature ThatKindofMature Mar 06, 2011
                              It gets weirder:)
                              Just wait til Luke the middle of the story:)