Undergoing Major Editing Changes
I love the part about there being nothing called a perfect life. I would have loved it if I had those powers of age reversing and shape shifting. The story is really interesting so I'm going to the next chapter.
Thank you guys for the comments for chapter 1. Ideas,tips,suggests keep them comming
She can read minds that's awesome wish I could lol :) great story!!
I feel as if something bad is going to happen to her, because of how concieted she is and teach her a lesson. Possibly?:D
loving the supernatural vibe cuz i am a fan of the vampires and witches and all that xD i think it is good but there are some mistakes in there ;) x
this is really good and i like the whole thing were no one lives a perfect life because its true and its makes the story more real