The Voice Of A Savior

The Voice Of A Savior

15.7K Reads 423 Votes 32 Part Story
SequenceD By SequenceD Updated Apr 02, 2013

Undergoing Major Editing Changes

SharonCompliance SharonCompliance Jul 21, 2012
I love the part about there being nothing called a perfect life. I would have loved it if I had those powers of age reversing and shape shifting. The story is really interesting so I'm going to the next chapter.
SequenceD SequenceD Jul 12, 2012
Thank you guys for the comments for chapter 1. Ideas,tips,suggests keep them comming
robertpattlove22 robertpattlove22 Jul 04, 2012
She can read minds that's awesome wish I could lol :) great story!!
DAWorld DAWorld Jul 01, 2012
I feel as if something bad is going to happen to her, because of how concieted she is and teach her a lesson. Possibly?:D
pontweep1 pontweep1 Jul 01, 2012
loving the supernatural vibe cuz i am a fan of the vampires and witches and all that xD i think it is good but there are some mistakes in there ;) x
MrsMalik_Tomlinson98 MrsMalik_Tomlinson98 Jul 01, 2012
this is really good and i like the whole thing were no one lives a perfect life because its true and its makes the story more real