The Voice Of A Savior

The Voice Of A Savior

32 Part Story 15.6K Reads 423 Votes
SequenceD By SequenceD Updated Apr 02, 2013 03:04PM

Undergoing Major Editing Changes

I love the part about there being nothing called a perfect life. I would have loved it if I had those powers of age reversing and shape shifting. The story is really interesting so I'm going to the next chapter.
SequenceD SequenceD Jul 12, 2012 03:39PM
Thank you guys for the comments for chapter 1. Ideas,tips,suggests keep them comming
She can read minds that's awesome wish I could lol :) great story!!
DAWorld DAWorld Jul 01, 2012 08:21PM
I feel as if something bad is going to happen to her, because of how concieted she is and teach her a lesson. Possibly?:D
pontweep1 pontweep1 Jul 01, 2012 08:10PM
loving the supernatural vibe cuz i am a fan of the vampires and witches and all that xD i think it is good but there are some mistakes in there ;) x
this is really good and i like the whole thing were no one lives a perfect life because its true and its makes the story more real