Holo  Robbins: The Begining of a New End

Holo Robbins: The Begining of a New End

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Holo Kaceena Robbins By Holo1996 Updated Mar 28, 2011

Having watched her mother stabbed to death by her very own uncle, Holo's life changes drasticly.She must travel all over the world without being noticed by her enemies.She must learn to fight and steal.She starts her journey alone.But when she meets the handsome, strong, and stubborn Altair she wondes whether or not she will end her journey alone....

BreeIreson BreeIreson Mar 11, 2015
This book is really rushing, take some time to read reread edit and add more in the places in need okay?
BreeIreson BreeIreson Mar 11, 2015
This is really good, but I think that maybe this book should be a little slower with maybe a bit more imagery
amora62 amora62 Mar 09, 2011
Yeah, you should!!  You're such a vivid writer and I want to see what happens next!  I can't believe everyone's not begging you to finish!