Breaking Dawn Twist [On Hold]

Breaking Dawn Twist [On Hold]

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dogpower77 By dogpower77 Updated May 02, 2012

When Edward and Bella argue about the first time they have sex, what if Bella insists on going for a walk? She ends up climbing a cliff into a hidden cave. When Alice calls Edward and tells him he should make up with Bella, he agrees and goes to find her. Edward follows Bellas scent and starts climbing the cliff, he calls her name, over and over. When she finally hears him she gets up to go greet him. As shes getting up she bumps her head on a piece of rock sticking out of the cliff, she than falls unconscious off the cliff and lands in the water.  Edward jumps in after her. Is it too late? will he save her in time? will her heart still be beating? will he turn her into a vampire?

niamhiee13 niamhiee13 Oct 25, 2011
love it
                              talk about a cliffhanger!!!!
                              I reckon Ed's gonna save her though
                              or she just gets hurt
                              coz I mean bella can't die
                              well she can but everyone would prob be extremely sad!!
                              lol
                              gr8 story 
                              love it!
TwilightFan1 TwilightFan1 Oct 15, 2011
ooooo.... what happends to bella ??? see you have to be the worst amoung all of them cause you keep putting all these cliffhangers :) lol <3 you, your an awsome writer and upload when you can please :) <3 it
bellacullen4ever bellacullen4ever Aug 30, 2011
its been forever since you updated and all of your works are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! please upload
bellacullen4ever bellacullen4ever Jul 29, 2011
Can u please upload like now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im getting anxious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twilightfan99 Twilightfan99 May 13, 2011
Please write more!!
                              I love the begining!
                              Awesome!!
                              :) write more please!