Don't Mess With Me ( ON HOLD)

Don't Mess With Me ( ON HOLD)

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Patricia By HipstaPlease139 Updated Jun 06, 2011

Jane gets her heart broken at first. And now she hates all guys and just play them. But when she meets Noah, will she just play him like she does to other boys or fall inlove again?

  • against
  • barbie
  • bitches
  • boys
  • family
  • friendship
  • guys
  • hatred
  • jealousy
  • love
  • odd
  • rejection
  • romance
  • school
  • sluts
  • sprak
  • summer
Wolf_LoverBoo Wolf_LoverBoo Jan 05, 2012
I think the whole chapter is absolutely funny, wild, cute and TOUGH for Jane! :'( Don't change any of it.
ashleysagossipgirl ashleysagossipgirl Jul 26, 2011
I love it! 'Wrong answer biatch.'  Oh, and love the pic btw. you just got dumped ^_^
ilove_louis4 ilove_louis4 Jul 22, 2011
Ohmygosh.. I think The plot is just fine too.! I like a lot of details so don't worry about it :) Changing the title is good. I guess. LOVE IT!
american_gurl american_gurl Jul 22, 2011
LOL hahaha! this is so funny. :) I disagree though. I actually loved the DETAILS! it's awesome! :L 
HipstaPlease139 HipstaPlease139 Jun 09, 2011
@rimmie558  err. okay? Can you help me with it though? Gee thanks :D
HipstaPlease139 HipstaPlease139 Apr 02, 2011
@LeeAnne75 I have no idea.. LMFBWROTFF! sorry.. got a little carried away there.. Thankyou though.. And no im not a gud writer racing heart is 
                              :D gudnyt lee anne..!! c u at skwl!! luvyuh.. xox
                              PBP