Jane gets her heart broken at first. And now she hates all guys and just play them. But when she meets Noah, will she just play him like she does to other boys or fall inlove again?
I think the whole chapter is absolutely funny, wild, cute and TOUGH for Jane! :'( Don't change any of it.
I love it! 'Wrong answer biatch.' Oh, and love the pic btw. you just got dumped ^_^
Ohmygosh.. I think The plot is just fine too.! I like a lot of details so don't worry about it :) Changing the title is good. I guess. LOVE IT!
LOL hahaha! this is so funny. :) I disagree though. I actually loved the DETAILS! it's awesome! :L
@rimmie558 err. okay? Can you help me with it though? Gee thanks :D
@LeeAnne75 I have no idea.. LMFBWROTFF! sorry.. got a little carried away there.. Thankyou though.. And no im not a gud writer racing heart is
:D gudnyt lee anne..!! c u at skwl!! luvyuh.. xox