A Speck of Light in an Abyss of Darkness

A Speck of Light in an Abyss of Darkness

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Vrinda By Musicbreatheslife Updated May 21, 2010

When the world is dark, and it seems there's no hope; When everything comes crashing down, and you feel like you can't cope; You silently pray for death to take you, Away from this world because theres nothing to hold you; At that moment, don't close your eyes, Keep them wide open and hold on to that tiny speck of light, That you see glowing faintly in the dark; And if you go closer it gets more warm, Take another step, and the seed has been sown, Take another, and you're almost there, Away from the dark, now bathing in the suns bright warm rays.

pheniox pheniox Sep 19, 2010
i really like how you described how she felt and everything most poeple just right " oh no my best friend is dead oh man!" and then they completly get over it i hate that but i really like this keep going man u rock
Musicbreatheslife Musicbreatheslife Jul 16, 2010
@Sophia5 oh okay you're right! I kinda just noticed that I'm using it more than nescessary. Again thanks for pointing it out!! I'll edit it. :)
Musicbreatheslife Musicbreatheslife Jul 16, 2010
@Sophia5 wow!! Thank you sooo much for reading this story!!! For some reason I kind of just gave up on it and haven't continued fora really long time!!! And Ill try to fix the punctuation errors. Thanks for pointing it out. :)
Mimzzzy Mimzzzy Jun 04, 2010
I love it even more, I love the fragmented paragraph which shows the accident it's really neat :D
Mimzzzy Mimzzzy Jun 04, 2010
Wow I like the way you describe her emotions and the vivid description of her actions, keep going :) 
dark-angel dark-angel May 22, 2010
wow...ur really gud:))))
                              i really lyk u story...cuz it makes me wonder wat mite happen next n dats amazing!!!