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The Bad Boy Kidnapped Me

The Bad Boy Kidnapped Me

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Aakifah :) By Aakifah5 Updated Sep 18, 2016

Annabelle Adams is a young 18 year old teenager who's treated as an outcast at school just because she doesn't flirt with every boy that walks pass, doesn't have a boyfriend or friends and doesn't act like a girly girl in other words a 'nerd' but not your average nerd she's the kind that stands up for herself and thats not afraid to draw the line. Everything is normal until one day when she's kidnapped by the worst person ever Chris Kingsley the schools bad boy. but one things for sure his got a dark secret.... no one knows... and as time passes she begins to realise not everything is as it seems, and sometimes your worst enemy could be your best friend

Hey this is a good book but it kinda sounds like a list. If you put it in paragraphs, it would sound more like a story. I don't want to sound rude cause the writing is really good but the layout could do with some improvements. Otherwise, good job 😂
ApriLTherty ApriLTherty Dec 30, 2016
It's really good like really good...nut,  I have OCD and it's KILLING me that there are no paragraphs here please make them into paragraphs
Elmo130 Elmo130 Apr 19, 2016
Is it sad that I had to look up what pumps were? Love the book BTW x
clydestang9410 clydestang9410 Nov 16, 2016
I just want to let you know that when you went to put switched the alarm off you put of other than that I love the book
SydTheSquid12345 SydTheSquid12345 Dec 30, 2015
I really like it so far, but Jesus lady, please Please PLease PLEase PLEAse PLEASe PLEASE........ ADD SOME PARAGRAPHS