Gumball & Marshall love blooms like a flower in a harsh winter
Okay this is super cute but you need to go and fix errors like start a new paragraph when a different person is talking. I got very confused
Ever heard of the 'dot' u use when ur done with a sentence? Ya know.. This thing --> .
Only Marshall would know if Bubba's butt was tight or not o_<
You need to revise this story. There is a lot of punctuation errors. The story would be a lot more enjoyable if you did. Nice storyline though.
I'm really surprised that no one said gumball and marshal sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g
ALOT of spelling errors sorry but good story line also punctuation and grammar are key. Lol I suck but I'm an author too and it's one I my pet peeves