The Demon's Soul

The Demon's Soul

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Ash By ash_knight17 Completed

She leaned down to look inside the well and sighed. Tucking back her hair behind her ear as the evening wind blew.
"I told you not to be a curious cat," she scolded looking at the well to receive a small 'meow' from it. Her cat had stepped on the edge of the well no matter how many times she placed it back on the ground and as expected it fell inside it, 

"You know what I'm going to leave you here and get you once you reflect on what you did," she said firmly and heard her cat meowing non-stop as though it was asking for her forgiveness. 

Spotting a bucket with rope around it she took it and lowered the object down carefully but the length fell short. The cat could get into it if it tried but it seemed to have different plans as it sat down. She leaned forward as she stood on her toes, making the bucket touch the cat.
"A little more and you can provide the cat with your company," a voice said behind her, leading her to almost fall in if it weren't for the stranger's hands.

"My my, what a troublesome girl," the owner of the hands around her waist said.

Lillian was adopted by a demon couple and was happy with how her life was going on until an unfortunate incident. An incident that will pull her back to where she belongs. Juggling with her past and present will she survive the future?

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Klenkerz Klenkerz Dec 13, 2016
You are a terrific writer. You give so much detail, and information. I love the book already, just by reading the beginning.  Keep up the great work!
Mo_Haney99 Mo_Haney99 Dec 27, 2016
If you made this book and you don't want us to share it with anyone then why did you make the book for then... 😕😕😕😕😕😠😠😠😠
The-Glass-Girl The-Glass-Girl Dec 09, 2016
I love how you began the story, just seems different then last time I read it but that  was two years ago. :D
shawnti1 shawnti1 Dec 22, 2016
i am actually am going to get adopted and i have a demon friend charlie son of satan and i hope that people will believe me.
BetaBuild BetaBuild Dec 27, 2016
It was short if it was longer we might have seen I hope you reboot it you talented.
Upperbunk Upperbunk Jan 10
Meeooooooow, meeeeeoow, MEEEEEOOOOW, sorry sorry, I'll get you out now