Don't Be Afraid

Don't Be Afraid

30 Part Story 1.4M Reads 14.5K Votes
kiara By kiaraissorad Completed

Rule #1: Never be alone, have someone always with you, no matter where you are.
    Rule #2: Don't acknowledged their presence or you'll give them the satisfaction of them scaring you.
    Rule #3: Always, and I mean Always have a crucifix with you no matter where you are.     
    Rule #4: Pray every night, every day, when you eat, and when you sleep. Keep faith.
    Rule #5: Don't let them get to you. They'll destroy your sanity and everything you believe in. They'll break you down until you're nothing.
    Rule #6: Lastly, don't be afraid.
    
    
    ***EDITING IN PROCESS (IGNORE THE 'EDITED' THING AT THE BEGINNING OF CHAPTERS, THE ONLY CHAPTERS I HAVE EDITED ARE ONE AND TWO)***

CreativeMummy CreativeMummy Jan 27, 2016 03:06AM
To me there is to much dialogue. Good stories have dialogue, but there is detail. What the room looks like, specific details abut how bright the light is and what are surroundings are. If we have no idea where the characters are then a basic place, then it's not really all that exciting.
QueenNakey QueenNakey Apr 11, 2015 03:48AM
I screaaaam. hahaha. It's so amazing. great story and keep writing. ^^
Len_Duh Len_Duh Mar 27, 2015 08:13PM
omg chapter 1 is amazing I just started reading and I'm already hooked on it plz keep up the good work 
mashuki mashuki Mar 19, 2015 12:16AM
@ReadAndEdit ummmm I knew that.. hence me saying Johnson isn't American :/
ReadAndEdit ReadAndEdit Mar 19, 2015 12:10AM
@AdannaArt There are no "American" surnames.  Native Americans didn't use them.  The immigrants granted them surnames based off of their respective country of origin.
ReadAndEdit ReadAndEdit Mar 19, 2015 12:07AM
Note from one writer to another:  tense should flow along the same reference unless back-flashing.  Present tense, all sentences excluding flashbacks should have "is".  Past should all have "was".