With all the Forces (Watty Awards 2012)

With all the Forces (Watty Awards 2012)

135 Reads 8 Votes 1 Part Story
mimi :D By KIDmimi Updated Jun 27, 2012

“Ma’am we don’t have all day,” he sighed, scratching his head in frustration.

I smirked, leaned back and turned my attention back to him. “You really want to know?”

He nodded once. “That’s why we’re here, Ma’am.”

Snarky bastard.

Mel fell for a a boy. One who broke her heart just to come back into it. After all she's been through, will she let him back so easily even if it means jeopardizing not only her career but also her marriage.

It's a story of betrayal, heart break, love and passion, with a little bit of murder thrown into the mix.

  • betrayal
  • boy
  • cold
  • discrimination
  • girl
  • hate
  • interrogation
  • what
  • when
  • young
KIDmimi KIDmimi Jun 27, 2012
@ShoveItWithNinjas I love How I met your mother, I just had to get it in there. It's going to have the how I met your mother structure; a big build up to a small ending.
coolstoryjacksparrow coolstoryjacksparrow Jun 27, 2012
Haha, "If you were turning this into How I Met Your Mother." That made me laugh. Anyways, this seems like a good story. I love how the main character is telling her background to this mysterious and funny guy! Good work.
                              -Cade x3
peaches_and_cream peaches_and_cream Jun 27, 2012
I didn't see any problems at all, or maybe I missed them. But i like the story so far. Nice work :)