The Omega Existence

The Omega Existence

45 Part Story 75K Reads 2.3K Votes
Seth Nathrah By SethNathrah Completed

It's 2066 and three billion people have vanished from the earth. Those who remain are left in chaos as the world teeters on the brink of destruction. Ben Castings, a priest who predicted the catastrophic event in a book that led to his excommunication, is determined to find a child destined to rule the next world with the help of his best friend, corporate tycoon Andrew Wyatt. 
    
    They aren’t the only ones determined to find this new King. Angels and Demons alike are frantically searching for him amidst a plague of terrors about to be released onto the world. With so much confusion on both sides and as war rages between Heaven and Hell, will everything unfold as was written?

JackWolf1 JackWolf1 Nov 24, 2013 06:40PM
The beginning should have been what happened. The main characters should be fleshed out more. I like the storyline, just bring out some more detail and you will have yourself more of a winner here. Do some revision and bring this "Hoss" out!
SethNathrah SethNathrah Mar 18, 2013 11:40AM
@vellyn Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you continue to read it, I'd love to read what you think about it :)
vellyn vellyn Mar 12, 2013 01:34PM
I like how you start the story! It's an interesting story. :) love it xo
SethNathrah SethNathrah Feb 19, 2013 09:29AM
@StillGrowingUp Thanks so much, I am so glad you enjoyed it and you were able to get drawn in. I'm humbled with you vote :) I hope you continue to read more
StillGrowingUp StillGrowingUp Feb 16, 2013 04:59AM
This is really interesting, I really like the introduction, it really drew me in.  Really great detail, it's very descriptive and makes everything really vivid.  I really enjoyed reading this, it's really interesting, very well done chapter (:
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Great introduction. I adore the descriptions and development of plot. Nicely written.