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Sorria Rothens By Sorria_Rothens Updated Jul 01, 2012

Arial's life seems to be on a downward spiral. Her mother's health is declining yet she still continues to turn to alcohol; Arial's home is under foreclose and the majority  their assets have been seized by the bank, penniless and with no where to turn they decide to contact Abrial's estranged Aunt Helena. Helena proposes that Arial and her mother move into her estate in a small northern surf town. There she meets Ash, a   big wave surfer with an even bigger heart and Misty, the fisherman's daughter who just so happens to be a near spiting image of Arial. Will Arial be able to uncover the truth behind her aunt and her mother's fall out, and how dose Misty fit into the picture? And will Arial be able to let go of her fears and  fall in love? Find out in this compelling romantic mystery.

CMQuinn CMQuinn Aug 09, 2012
Interesting, well because I'm bored and this sounds pretty good, I'll keep reading :)
Harlum_X Harlum_X Jul 07, 2012
I like Leah, she seems cool! Anyway, i like you're writing style, it's very different and your fluency is amazing! Your descriptions are amazing and your characters seem so realistic and it's so sad how they're being evicted! But great chapter! :) Oh and nice dialogue too!
SladeWinters SladeWinters Jul 07, 2012
Omg. her hair and the school omg lol. This is good, sad but good. The leah girl, her bff or whatever seems like a really good friend. I really like this story. very nice job.
A_Bella A_Bella Jul 07, 2012
I love your descriptions! You have a very unique writing style that is very intruiging. I loved the dialogue with the characters, it made them very real and the situation very real. Well done! :)