Can't find the words (ON HOLD)

Can't find the words (ON HOLD)

411 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
skyemg By skyemg Updated Mar 05, 2011

At first There to shy to speak and communicate with sweets but soon they fall in love and have a happy family, but when something happens that will send the whole family spiralling out of control the childhood sweethearts will be forced to only communicate with there favourite sweets again

AmoreLove413 AmoreLove413 Mar 11, 2011
i like your descriptions, very nice story so far!! Tommy sound adorablleee
thelionftw thelionftw Mar 11, 2011
Very nicely written! You can feel the emotion. There were some grammar errors, but we all have those.
                              Good job! Keep it up(:
                              You've earned my vote.
ActNatural ActNatural Mar 11, 2011
I really like it and I think it is cutee, there were some grammatical errors, but that can be fixed with help :)
ForestSwanSong ForestSwanSong Mar 11, 2011
Aww that's sweet. I look forward to another chapter 
                              
                              ~Lacey 
FelZiz FelZiz Mar 10, 2011
woah! i was reading and was like SCREAMING where is the rest! lol you left me wanting more!!!!
xxMagicEyesxx xxMagicEyesxx Mar 05, 2011
Thanks for the dedication babes !!!! xxxx Have you read ch. 3 of Soul Swap yet ??? xxx If not then please do!!! xxxx Comment and vote !!!! This is amazing!!! xx Upload soon xx :D !!!!!!