Double Identity

Double Identity

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Greyson Drew By GreysonDrew Completed

“That was marvelous!” He said. “Great job, Frank. Or, should I say, Franchesca?” I took a deep breath. A very, very deep breath.

“Oh my God,” Was the most intelligent thing I could say.

“’Oh my God’ is correct. How long have you been lying to us?”

“Since the first day of school.” I couldn’t help but answer truthfully.

“Why?”

“A lot of reasons. Reasons you can’t understand.”

“Try me.”

“I’d rather not.” He sat down next to me on the edge, and for the first time since I got to the pool, I felt like covering myself up. Sure, my one-piece covered everything required, but I still felt… odd. I mean, one of the perfect boys from Connor Stanley was sitting right next to me. And for the first time, within the walls of this school, I was Franchesca.

“Try me.”
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 Franchesca Hyde is an unwanted daughter. Her father and mother, a famous music producer and supermodel, had an unplanned pregnancy, and ended up with an odd looking girl. Wanting to keep their reputation up, they introduced Chesca as Frank to the world.

Now, sixteen years later, her parents ignore her, and don’t even notice when she dyes her hair a completely different color. They even set up a year-long trip to Europe, leaving Chesca behind. They stick her into a prestigious all-boys school in New York, Connor Stanley. 

At Connor Stanley, she has four hot roommates, Anthony, Derek, Paul, and Mark. Her best friend, back-up best friend, friend, and unknown. Her relationship with Mark is always uncertain, and she never knows where she stands.

Will they ever find out about her double identity?

loany528 loany528 Feb 24, 2014
LUV IT .....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:DD:D:D:D:D:DD::
                              but IM SURPRISED THAT no one really comments..!!11!
GreysonDrew GreysonDrew May 19, 2013
@CrazyKayzy Thank you so much! Hahaha, yeah, it is a little cliche. In fact, I wrote it to sorta be cliche. Hopefully, you'll keep reading it, and tell me what you think once you've read it :)
Amazyy Amazyy May 19, 2013
So far so good! First of all, I wanna tell you that I loved your blurb! it hooked me up :) I liked the idea of Franchesca pretending to be a boy! It is so cool. It seems cliche but whatever, your storyline seems great.
GreysonDrew GreysonDrew May 06, 2013
@damons_girl21 Hahaha :) It does cause some complications. Hope you enjoy the story :D
GreysonDrew GreysonDrew Jul 14, 2012
@Franchesca329 Danica, it's the same one as the one on FictionPress -.- I didn't see any typographical errors, so ALL I DID WAS RE-POST IT.