Smoke me, feel me, release me

Smoke me, feel me, release me

11 Part Story 22.9K Reads 1K Votes
Donyas By Donyas Updated Dec 27, 2012

Release my pain
    smoke my dreams away...
    let me feel it deep inside,
    your lustful taste of lips...
    
    © Donyas, 2012-2013

LeliaVoinea LeliaVoinea Jun 15, 2013 04:05PM
@Donyas superba poezie, am ramas fara cuvinte. Am recitit-o de mai multe ori!
Donyas Donyas Mar 15, 2013 02:01PM
@Saisei_Niju_San  important is u feel the poem :) that makes me think my readers enjoy my work !!!  thanks a lot highly appreciate \m/
SenCrown SenCrown Mar 15, 2013 09:21AM
Amazing piece here, the tones of death and desire I absolutly love it very similar to my own style and it speaks to something in me I just cant fully describe.
Donyas Donyas Jan 14, 2013 02:35PM
@weird_bunny hey lil bunny thanks a lot, ur feedback is highly appreciated !!! \m/
weird_bunny weird_bunny Jan 13, 2013 10:48PM
Mind-blown. This is such a lovely poem. The emotion was so intense and you portrayed it very well! Good job!
Donyas Donyas Jan 13, 2013 11:26AM
@iheartmusic4ever OMGosh!!! u've gotta be kidding me??? really i got 2nd?? damn i'm hyper happy fcking face lol \m/
                                    thanks a lot!!! highly appreciate your support!!!!! \m/