Smoke me, feel me, release me

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Donyas By Donyas Updated 3 years ago
Release my pain
    smoke my dreams away...
    let me feel it deep inside,
    your lustful taste of lips...
    © Donyas, 2012-2013
@Donyas superba poezie, am ramas fara cuvinte. Am recitit-o de mai multe ori!
Amazing piece here, the tones of death and desire I absolutly love it very similar to my own style and it speaks to something in me I just cant fully describe.
Mind-blown. This is such a lovely poem. The emotion was so intense and you portrayed it very well! Good job!
You got second! This poem was amazing and the way you came across was so spooky and mysterious. It really tugged our heartstrings if you know what I mean :P Thanks for entering again! AMAZING!
Oh,wow....just,wow.. It took me ages to read this, I am not very good at reading English, but I'm so glad I did it was so beautiful yet scary :)
i could feel the pain you are going and how you are copping with it it was very beautiful