Release my pain
smoke my dreams away...
let me feel it deep inside,
your lustful taste of lips...
© Donyas, 2012-2013
@Donyas superba poezie, am ramas fara cuvinte. Am recitit-o de mai multe ori!
@Saisei_Niju_San important is u feel the poem :) that makes me think my readers enjoy my work !!! thanks a lot highly appreciate \m/
Amazing piece here, the tones of death and desire I absolutly love it very similar to my own style and it speaks to something in me I just cant fully describe.
@weird_bunny hey lil bunny thanks a lot, ur feedback is highly appreciated !!! \m/
Mind-blown. This is such a lovely poem. The emotion was so intense and you portrayed it very well! Good job!
@iheartmusic4ever OMGosh!!! u've gotta be kidding me??? really i got 2nd?? damn i'm hyper happy fcking face lol \m/
thanks a lot!!! highly appreciate your support!!!!! \m/