Falling for the Lie

Falling for the Lie

853 Reads 30 Votes 3 Part Story
skyemg By skyemg Updated Aug 01, 2011

"Have you ever held someone's life in your hands? I have literally."

Nate loves Amy, Amy and Nate go out, Amy loves Na... well actually Amy loves Jason, the new boy.. uh oh!
Its albeit a slightly cliched story, with your slightly depressing and inevitably doomed love triangle.. only joking! but has a few crucial twists to keep you on edge. So read this story to see how things  get from bad to disasterious for sweet, senseless, unfortunate Nate
and better and better for you typical bitch Amy. And people say life lifes unfair?

realityxfantasy realityxfantasy Aug 03, 2011
Well written but there are some grammar errors, please fix them. This story is one that I find kind of cliche. A mean girl caught in a love triangle with two gorgeous boys? Cliche. Seriously. Although I thought you did a great job writing this story, it's not really my thing...sorry!
motherhenna motherhenna Aug 02, 2011
Seems pretty interesting so far; not my type of story, but it's still pretty well-written.  ;)
MidnightStarz MidnightStarz Aug 02, 2011
The introduction is good, I especially like how it's the guys POV, There are some grammar errors that are in your story, but it's nothing you can't fix. :)
zo_willhight zo_willhight Aug 02, 2011
omg that girl is a total stick of beef jerky!!! That is soo mean I am definitely going to read the rest of this but just for the boy because I feel bad now...:( Voted though!
skyemg skyemg Aug 02, 2011
@XxIcyxX  SO true I kept trying to do the I's  but i they all seemed to be lower case! also ye brake i complletly blanked on how to spell that word :L
ForestSwanSong ForestSwanSong Mar 11, 2011
Gah! I wish this guy would get a backbone. If a guy treated me like this, I would dump him in a second!
                              
                              Good story though! On to the next chapter...