Close to the Crown {On Hold until Feb 2016}

Close to the Crown {On Hold until Feb 2016}

26 Part Story 8.3K Reads 200 Votes
Sophie-Lou By Sophie_Bryan Updated Aug 07, 2013 04:12PM

NOTE: THIS BOOK IS UNDERGOING INTENSE EDITING. NOT ALL CHAPTERS HAVE BEEN WORKED ON. MAJOR CHANGES ARE BEING MADE, SO UNTIL THE EDITING PROCESS HAS FINISHED, IT WILL NOT MAKE SENSE. PLEASE BARE THIS IN MIND WHILE READING. COMPLETED CHAPTERS ARE MARKED WITH 'REWRITTEN AND EDITED', AND THESE CHAPTERS ARE SAFE TO READ.
    
    The first book in 'The Crown Trilogy'.
    Incomplete.
    Lilliana Thorne is the daughter of a Duke, a Lord and a very close friend to the King, The Duke of Windsor, Sir Alfred Thorne. Lilliana and the King's daughter, Adelaide are very close friends and are tutored by the same private royal tutor at Buckingham Palace. For years, the two men, both the King and the Duke have been trying to Pair Lilliana, with the King's only son and the next King, William, but things aren't as easy as they seem. Lily, as she also goes by, enjoys her life and the privileges she has, but she knows it's only so long, before she no longer has those freedoms, and she will have to marry the man who has been her enemy for as long as she can remember.

violet_skies violet_skies Apr 07, 2013 10:50AM
I really like the first chapter, spelling is pretty good, only a few mistakes here and there. I like the plot, and I have to agree, I really like that there is a lot going on. It keeps the interest!
                                    Good Start!
JustHaych JustHaych Mar 03, 2013 12:17PM
=) That was really good =D I enjoyed reading it, It was so posh! hahah, if fit perfectly with your book! =D Awesome! =D
                                    
                                    I liked your idea =) it's really good =)
Sophie_Bryan Sophie_Bryan Mar 02, 2013 07:12AM
We did it guys!! 1000 reads by my birthday; thank you so much!
exodus238 exodus238 Nov 19, 2012 08:16PM
So far this is great! I really like your writing style and the idea is interesting :D I like it when there's lots of things going on - otherwise it gets a bit boring lol! 
                                    *voted* x
Sophie_Bryan Sophie_Bryan Nov 03, 2012 06:14PM
@wackly_j thank you very much :)
                                    There will be an update it a few days
wackly_j wackly_j Nov 03, 2012 08:14AM
Ohhh. Sounds like a good story so far. Lots of things going on which I love! Keep up the great work :D