Long Lost Sister (One Direction)

Long Lost Sister (One Direction)

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Kym Williams By KymWilliams Completed

(COMPLETED) Jessie's life will change forever but will it be a happy change or one that will get destroyed by the man that took her life away before?

Hi, i was just wondering if you would check out my story, it's my first one and I've just started writing it, if not no worries! Thank you! :)
danayaneil danayaneil May 25
I love the zipper!!! My high score for flipping around was 11!!! I only went on it 3 times too!!!!
KymWilliams KymWilliams Jan 12
Thanks for the advice! I'll have to go in and edit eventually but glad you're liking it
gjpf2000 gjpf2000 Jan 12
really good first chapter, try to add some comma's then it would make a bit more sense. other than that, loved the first chapie. liking the story plot so far