BIG change

BIG change

273 Reads 8 Votes 10 Part Story
KJPhelps By KJPhelps Updated Nov 16, 2018

If you are reading this book then it's because, like me, you want a beautiful future. You don't want a world that is largely dead and at war with itself. You want a world where we can all be at peace with ourselves, each other, and the living world which we all share. 

You don't want a world where you constantly have to worry about: am I attractive enough, am I important enough, am I safe from poverty. You don't want a world where you have to worry about who is a threat to your well-being through control, competition or violence. You don't want a world where you must be fearful about the quality of the air you breathe, the water you drink, or the food you eat. Nor do you want to be terrified of starvation and loneliness as the Earth's flora and fauna dies off. 

What you want is big change for a beautiful future!

  • changemaker
  • environment
  • future
  • peace
KJPhelps KJPhelps Sep 01, 2018
I love the word "peeps"! It's a good non-gender specific word with the same feeling as "guys". As in: "You peeps wanna see the latest Thor movie?" rather than "You guys wanna see Thor?"
                              Do you think it's too old and out-of-fashion?
xanni_au xanni_au Aug 01, 2018
"Sometimes people manage both at the same time" is punchier as a separate sentence.
KJPhelps KJPhelps Sep 30, 2018
This is a first draft and I can already tell that I am going to want to switch chapters around and punch up the writing here and there. Your thoughts are much appreciated!
GeekAtlas GeekAtlas Oct 30, 2018
A breath of fresh air. Most of us, Siths, we are. But, the Jedi Path is what you speak of. One walking myself. The Force is STRONG with you!