What is a person? And what is the mind? What is the mind capable of? This short story is about a girl who experiences the darker sides of the human mind. Whether it ends well for her or not, you ask? That, you have to find out for yourself.
I think im in love with the presentation and the intro-outro paradox
@WinterChill Ah, thank you thank you! I see you've been on a reading spree, hehe! :) I'm glad you liked it, and comments like that make me want to write more! :) Thanks!
Wow, all of your stuff I've read so far make you think of life in a different way. It's really fun to see our world differently :D I love the complex writing you use.
Creepers!! That was awesome! My favorite part was the hearts and their last beats. Truly disgusting and loads of horror.
@JamesDSwinney It's up to you to decide! :D But as for me, I imagine there only being one person, with a sort of "split personality"
@CjayS42 Thanks! Well, it's up to the reader to decide, anyway! :))