Crimson Red

Crimson Red

1 Part Story 527 Reads 20 Votes
Claudia By CarolinaV Updated Dec 04, 2010

What is a person? And what is the mind? What is the mind capable of? This short story is about  a girl who experiences the darker sides of the human mind. Whether it ends well for her or not, you ask? That, you have to find out for yourself.

I think im in love with the presentation and the intro-outro paradox
CarolinaV CarolinaV Aug 17, 2011 08:35AM
@WinterChill Ah, thank you thank you! I see you've been on a reading spree, hehe! :) I'm glad you liked it, and comments like that make me want to write more! :) Thanks!
WinterChill WinterChill Aug 17, 2011 05:40AM
Wow, all of your stuff I've read so far make you think of life in a different way. It's really fun to see our world differently :D I love the complex writing you use.
Creepers!! That was awesome! My favorite part was the hearts and their last beats. Truly disgusting and loads of horror. 
CarolinaV CarolinaV Feb 22, 2011 09:43AM
@JamesDSwinney It's up to you to decide! :D But as for me, I imagine there only being one person, with a sort of "split personality" 
CarolinaV CarolinaV Dec 11, 2010 05:24PM
@CjayS42 Thanks! Well, it's up to the reader to decide, anyway! :))