Two brothers named John and Finnick are in a zombie apocalypse, surviving day after day is becoming a challenge. Especially since one of the brothers is a zombie.
@inkyFairytale Thnx, but I don't really put in paragraphs, to much proofreading, thnx for the tip though :)
I think that perhaps it might be best if you could've sectioned the first paragraph, into more paragraphs. It just seems too ... bunched-up. It's only an option though, I mean it's up to you. :)
I'm enjoying this so far. You've done a good job and good effort. :)
Oh, this is a wonderful beginning. :)
I'll continue reading! ^_^ It's intrigued my interest!