Pale Chapter 1

Pale Chapter 1

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Kay By FindingANewWayOut Updated Mar 21, 2011

Marie is a 7 year old kindergarder who is abuse sexualy and phsicaly by her parents and is always hiding. She finally gets the nevre to tell her friend about the abuse and together they go behind the parents backs to create an underground railroad for abused children in thier school by smuggling abused children in to the houses of other children who will help out and they find that there are more than just a few children that are being abuse and even parents who wear smiles and take thier children to school my not be good parents.

Beanie_321 Beanie_321 Mar 10, 2011
AWWWW, so sad. This is a very touching chapter. Keep up the good work!
                              
                              Beanie_321
penguinbih penguinbih Mar 05, 2011
well i most say i like this one cause it's very deep not like everyone's else who usually write so tense. Keep writing this one :)
champsissy champsissy Mar 04, 2011
But other than that the story is extremely interesting, I would like to read more. When you get the chance,  you should write another chapter. (sorry about this little extra, I accidently posted X( ) Keep writing. 
FindingANewWayOut FindingANewWayOut Mar 04, 2011
Thanks so much! I can't begin to tell you how much it means and thanks for the advice! I will definatly start to do that!