Raindrops

Raindrops

1 Part Story 136 Reads 17 Votes
Abby By Snowdrop07 Completed

I thought of this poem one day as it was raining, and I decided not to think of the raindrops as tears, or even as glistening droplets, but as raindrops whom nature had doomed to die since before they were even formed. Another of my personal favourites (out of my poetry, that is).

MoonshineNoire MoonshineNoire Jul 04, 2014 06:10PM
Why make me sad lol?! Love this. Such a small thing magnified. Beautiful!
raindrop raindrop Apr 03, 2013 09:27PM
Splat!
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                                    This was beautifully written, and the poem has an ending that is definitely...very final. I like the almost-rhymes as well(:
Snowdrop07 Snowdrop07 Dec 14, 2012 07:50PM
@Llamadillo5 Sorry, I didn't notice your comment until now! Thank you so much, and actually, I did enter the Attys (and got on the shorlist *awkward victory dance*) but not with this poem. :D @seasofme Haha, thanks! :)) I guess I just like writing short poems sometimes. *shrugs* :D
seasofme seasofme Dec 14, 2012 07:32PM
U say the most important things in the most succinct way. I love that.
Llamadillo5 Llamadillo5 Sep 25, 2012 01:39PM
That was amazing! I love the thought of rain how you look at it. Like you said most people see it as tardrops or sadness, but never think of the drops themselves. Great poem! I hope you enter in the atty's for sure!
Snowdrop07 Snowdrop07 Sep 08, 2012 05:03PM
@ninjaboy12199 Thanks! As a matter of fact, I am. :D Only one more poem to go, now.