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Eternal,Its who I am [ON HOLD]

Eternal,Its who I am [ON HOLD]

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Safa By MyThoughtsInWords Updated Jul 02, 2012

For Savannah Louis going through the streets wasn't easy. You never knew who was on your side and who was against you.
In her world, it was split into 2;  
-the good
-the evil.
The Eternals and the Denomenators.
Then there were the Mortals, helpless humans who had no idea what was going on. While the Eternals fought with all there will to protect the Mortals from the Denominators in a very hard time,Savannah finds out after her parents die, that they were the Masters of the Eternal Kingdom and now she has to take over.
What do you do when the whole world is relying on you but they don't know and they cant find out?

MyThoughtsInWords MyThoughtsInWords Jul 06, 2012
@myperspective lol thanks hun and sure i cant write for this whole week though im going on holidays :I so yeah keep reading :D
myperspective myperspective Jul 04, 2012
Wow can't wait to know wat happens next and if you don't finish this it's will be the last thing youll ever's a promise;)
MyThoughtsInWords MyThoughtsInWords Jun 28, 2012
@BenMcKenna Thank and i appreciate the feedback :) my teacher says that to me all the time as well i guess hes not the only one :DD and ill try as best as I can :)
BenMcKenna BenMcKenna Jun 28, 2012
I like the plot line so far, very interesting, the only thing I would say is your grammar could use with a check. When you're implying "You are" You use "You're" and "Their" is possession and "They're" Is "They are" and "There" as in place. That's all :) I'll read the rest now :)