Nirrin (REVISED version) (Forestfolk Book 3)

Nirrin (REVISED version) (Forestfolk Book 3)

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Zoe Blessing By Zoe_Blessing Completed

After receiving a lot of great feedback, I've made some huge changes to the story, particularly the last 1/3 of the book. Complete departure from the original ending. If you've read the original version already, I'd love to know what you think of this version. Hit or miss?

Nirrin spends her days in Foresthome caring for orphans, getting into trouble, and listening to other people's adventures with secret envy. Which is why following an intriguing stranger into an unknown part of the forest seemed like a good idea at the time. 

Nirrin doesn't expect to find her missing parents among a band of odd-looking misfits, but family is family, right? Her hopes to reclaim the kin she'd lost are challenged, however, when she uncovers their violent plot against "Normals" like her. They'll make an exception for her (Nirrin has always been great at exempting herself from rules), but doing nothing would mean endangering her friends in Foresthome. She must stop these outcasts from--who is she kidding? She's a smart-mouthed girl with no special talents. What is she going to do, talk them to death?

Maybe babysitting a bunch of other orphans in Foresthome wasn't such a bad deal after all.

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I hate that everyone in this underestimates Nirrin, and never gives her character any depth.
on the second sentence you're supposed to put the period outside of the parentheses. just fyi, don't want to seem picky or mean or anything. btw, I love your stories! They're clean, appropriate, don't follow any stereotypes, and keeps me wanting more! I literally just binge-read Sember in 2 days.
BeaCurious BeaCurious Oct 29
I like the last paragraph. The falling leaf mimicking her feelings. Well done!
Lilyavigale Lilyavigale Jul 28
I'm finally going to read it. And I'm going to read it like it's my first time. I'll comment on the footnotes as usual..😄
QuitStaring QuitStaring Nov 03
Been here since Sienna, and still loving your books. Nirrin with a sass and more character was def bomb, I'd gladly read and continue my support for you! If you have any stories that I can purchase with coins, I'd support it too
EturnalDawn EturnalDawn Sep 05
I’m gonna read it all again cuz i LOVE rereading books that I liked. One of my favorite books I’ve reread like five times. 😁