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Dancing in the Lilies

Dancing in the Lilies

9.8K Reads 248 Votes 17 Part Story
storyygirlyy By storyygirlyy Completed

19 year-old Leah is forced to go on vacation with her family to see her grandma in Texas. Once in Texas, Leah's grandma introduces her to Tyler, a farmhand who helps with the horses on her ranch. The connection between them is instant. However, while Leah's grandma is pushing hard for the relationship to progress, Leah's overbearing mother does everything she can to make sure that her daughter is not in a relationship with someone who she doesn't approve of. Over the summer, Leah finally decided to not let her mother stand in the way of what she wants anymore. However, having a relationship behind her mother's back is not as easy as Leah originally thinks.

ToriDimples ToriDimples Oct 23, 2011
Good start. Few spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. I agree with @Queen694u
XxSaachxX XxSaachxX Mar 10, 2011
I really liked this chapter. The best point about this story is that ur nt rushing through it. Sorry cant vote as i am reading from my cell, but once i read it from my laptop i will surely vote :)