Under Your Skin

Under Your Skin

4.6K Reads 42 Votes 13 Part Story
LJ By LJWarren Updated Jun 29, 2011

Lana is sick and tired of being used. So when an opportunity arises for her to get away from her life for a while and see a new country, she jumps at the chance. Her parents, though apprehensive to begin with, soon decide to let her go.
Carlos is a loud mouthed typical Spaniard. He spends his time going out with his mates and getting drunk. So when he’s ordered to look after the new student at school he hates the idea and vows to make the experience as horrible as possible for her. 
Lana didn’t bank on finding the one person who wants nothing from her, unlike the rest of the world.
And Carlos didn’t bank on letting someone he’s only just met get so far under his skin.

    fawncreep fawncreep Jan 06, 2012
    Okay so I watched the trailer and read the description, not even half way through both I was like 'well screw it, I'm reading this no matter what'. I haven't started yet(lies; I read the first paragraph) but I have good feeling about this story :)
    LJWarren LJWarren Mar 15, 2011
    @WickedGleek96 aww thank you :) i'm really glad you gave up your time to check my story out. 
                                  hope you enjoy the rest :D
    - - Mar 15, 2011
    I'm learning Spanish right now so this is a good way for me to practice. I liked it. As guarded heart said it is very authentic. I have a problem showing not telling too! I guess you have to work on it. I liked the story line, and I think you did a great job on it. Keep it up!