I love you a negative 101% [ON HOLD]

I love you a negative 101% [ON HOLD]

5.6K Reads 205 Votes 6 Part Story
Chaenerys By WatermelonSmoothie Updated Nov 20, 2011

Everything about Hazel's life changed when summer ended. After her perfect summer was over, she and her mom moved to America from France to study at this prestigious School. There she met her best friend, and one day, the school player dumped her and Hazel - being the friend that she is, hated seeing her best friend devastated. So she went ahead and plotted a plan for revenge. Fate was on her side for the school player happened to show interest in her. So she went out with him, so that she can go on with her evil revenge plan, but before going out with him, they had a contract, and she only had one condition: To keep it a secret from her best friend.
There will be a lot of twists around the plot so what will happen to her along the way?

Nerali Nerali Nov 30, 2011
WHAT I LIKE:
                              ~ The story's so cute!
                              ~ Good flow
                              ~ No grammar mistakes I could find!
BrisLyn BrisLyn Nov 24, 2011
@CharmaineRodil haha, well you don't have to write 'formal', if you're writing for you, do what you like. Not everything has to be professional and to everyone's liking. :)
WatermelonSmoothie WatermelonSmoothie Nov 24, 2011
@rainingmarshmellows o.O I never meant for any of this to be a joke :O
                              It just.. kinda did XDD
                              even though it surprisingly became 'humor' I'm glad it was still able to reach and make a couple of people happy :3
WatermelonSmoothie WatermelonSmoothie Nov 24, 2011
@Immanuel_IMG Thanks for the advice! :O
                              
                              Cant help myselfff!! :S I need medication :O XDD
WatermelonSmoothie WatermelonSmoothie Nov 24, 2011
@Essaya That would be Epicly... painful? XD
                              hahaha thank you for reading :3
BrisLyn BrisLyn Nov 24, 2011
Haha, this is good. :)
                              
                              I'd just not put *Flash Back* Maybe place the flashback in italics? The flash back is distracting and takes me out of the story. :) Just a tip! :D