destiny

destiny

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sonalikumar By sonalikumar Updated Mar 03, 2011

Lisa's fate is to be a looser,.....but what happens when she's forced ot face her true destiny...a time travel...will her destiny change?

sonalikumar sonalikumar Jan 11, 2012
@KITTYkat1234  i really didn't edit it believe me.....this just written in a hurry....but my next novel am working on will be much better
k8ybug k8ybug Jan 10, 2012
Hey this is good, maybe some more examples between the dialogue. And looser is actually spelled LOSER
KITTYkat1234 KITTYkat1234 Jan 10, 2012
You should maybe try making new chapters. That's my only criticism. Apart from that, well done! It's a cool story :)