Didn't you read the fine print? (On Hold)

Didn't you read the fine print? (On Hold)

2.9K Reads 44 Votes 4 Part Story
Elisha By Leasha Updated May 28, 2011

William is something else! He's like no other person Vanessa has ever met. He like's to keep to himself and won't look anyone in the eye. William is something else as a person but is he a person? Vanessa is about to go on the ride of her life as she is dragged into a world she didn't think was real. The question is: does William have anything to do with it or is he just another one of Vanessa's obsessions?

VenusLora VenusLora Nov 26, 2012
Cute and playful intro... Plus, first story I've come across today with flawless grammer. 
                              Nice work.
Leasha Leasha May 29, 2011
@taiga-aisaka thank you for reading.... i am glad you enjoyed it
                              
hopefulromantic hopefulromantic May 27, 2011
The prologue is cute and believable. Seemed like they were having a beeping blast! 
                              
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GeorgiaLuff GeorgiaLuff Mar 04, 2011
OMG I LOVE YOU THANK YOU I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! WAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
KAFrak KAFrak Mar 03, 2011
Overall I thought the writing was detailed and good. As a prologue, atleast you aimed to make thing interestings
                              
                              
                              
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