Selected

Selected

245K Reads 12.7K Votes 32 Part Story
JennKay By JennKayy16 Completed

Perfection. That's what we strive for. It's what everybody strives for. We must be perfect. Selection will help us become perfect.
In a world where the government selects people to mate based on their genotypes and DNA alleles. Emmary Eaton, birthing number 45729 is ripped from her home and everything she knows to be dropped in a society she is more than unfamiliar with to be with her assigned mate. Soon she discovers that there is more to her new family and Selection than meets the eye. Secrets start to unfold as well as ulterior motives and innocent Emmary Eaton is unwillingly thrust into the middle of it all.

Beatific21 Beatific21 Jul 18
Fingerprints never change that should be enough...poor thing
Beatific21 Beatific21 Jul 18
@cmlangley another one!! "....how much fun we HAD!" 😂😂😂
kc112233 kc112233 Jul 08
^^ no offense to anyone who likes to correct people but this bîtch is getting on my nerves
cmlangley cmlangley Jan 07
Another run on sentence: "I was hoping he'd be a girl. Unfortunately, he turned out to be a boy, and so did Elex..."
cmlangley cmlangley Jan 07
I would separate the first sentence into two. "He simply shrugged. Teyland was back in a matter of seconds."
                              
                              Also I would put a comma after go.
cmlangley cmlangley Jan 07
I would take out the "now." I think it reads better without it.