Dubious Mystery Tour

Dubious Mystery Tour

1.4K Reads 7 Votes 6 Part Story
Bryce Campbell By brycec Updated Jun 04, 2011

While on summer break, a boy is forced to join a friend on a mystery tour, which can have anywhere between 10 and 15 participants split into five groups. The person who wins get half a million dollars. However, the details of the tour, the prize, and the location makes the boy think that something similar, with variations, to Agatha Christie's And Then There Were None will happen.

AndrewT AndrewT Mar 20, 2011
htis driver is horrid he needs his license taken AWAY FROM him permanantly before he kills somebody...
                              
                              Finally I get to be the one pointing out an error! lol
brycec brycec Mar 04, 2011
@AndrewT I'm glad that you like my attention to detail.  There are things that I need to fix, but I'll leave them alone, until the story has an end.
AndrewT AndrewT Mar 03, 2011
I really like your close attention to imagery! :)haha I'm only on part 1 still lol but I just had to comment anyways even though I didn't finish reading! XD