Finding Talent (1)

Finding Talent (1)

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Bella By sweetembers Completed

When Sadie was 18, her parents were killed in a car accident, leaving her all alone on her ranch with her quarter horses. Most of them she sold off, but she kept a few favorites to show and breed. University doesn't have a place in her mind;horses are the only thing that matter to her now. Then, on a visit to a family friend's farm, she sees an ordinary bay gelding, who she becomes interested and buys. This horse is special though. It has a secret talent, and its up to Sadie to find it.

dark_archer_12 dark_archer_12 Dec 15, 2016
I love your story! Pinto isn't a breed though... Just a color... The breed is a Paint... Other than that I LOVE IT!
RacingUnderTheLights RacingUnderTheLights Mar 01, 2016
Most of the pintos that you see are quarter horses with paint markings. Many horses are double registered as paints and quarters.
MexicanHorse MexicanHorse Jul 26, 2014
That's just a color breed... It can still have an actual breed just it would be classified as a "pinto quarter horse"
irodeo irodeo Jun 18, 2014
AMEN you used the word "Herefords" rather than "cows" thank the good lord!an actual breed, makes you sound like a better writer!
KelveyLClemons KelveyLClemons Sep 20, 2013
The storyline itself is great! I would like to have seen the main character deal with her emotions and resposponsibilities from her parents death versus it just being glossed over, but then again everyone deals with grief in their own time frame and way. Great job!!
skye_wolverine7 skye_wolverine7 Sep 09, 2013
page one- there's a spelling mistake. "...and all the animals toO."u forgot the extra 'o'.