Earth Bound

Earth Bound

9 Part Story 3.1K Reads 220 Votes
citydreamer By citydreamer Updated Aug 15, 2012

Delaney Taylor is a guardian angel in training. In all her eighteen years of existence she has managed to be over looked when the time comes to make the annual visit to Earth. Her elders say that she is too young and immature. But on her eighteenth birthday a mission arrives at the pearly white gates that can only be fulfilled by her. Delaney must become a regular high school student at Fieldwaters Academy and find out why so many students are going missing. It's not going to be as easy as she first assumed though when she finds herself fascinated by the schools heartthrob, Brody Collins. His strange, alluring human qualities might just be enough to distract her from her mission. And if that is the case, who else will go missing while her back is turned? All she knows is that if she fails she could be banished from Heaven and be earth bound forever.

Sorria_Rothens Sorria_Rothens Jul 15, 2012 04:32AM
This is a wonderful prolog, short 'n sweet as well as having great detail that will really help set up the reader to better understand the story.
permafrost permafrost Jul 14, 2012 11:24AM
OMG. Isn't that a little too harsh for her?! She's not even a full Guardian Angel yet, and she's already given such a difficult task?! Not using wings nor magic?! Poor angel... ): I really liked the trailer. (: And the song is from an anime!!! xDD
NaTTyKiinz NaTTyKiinz Jul 14, 2012 05:56AM
i love guardian angel stories!  also, god put a lot of pressure on her shoulders haha
dolewhips dolewhips Jul 13, 2012 06:27AM
You make the humans sound . . . Odd , well we are odd creatures , lollol (:
                                    
                                    Well , I like the title of the story , & nice prologue too ! Man , If I was Delaney , I'd be like freaking out possibly ? (:
                                    
                                    Nice idea , fantasy kind , good luck on the rest of this (:
citydreamer citydreamer Jul 11, 2012 09:28AM
@RomanceGraphics At first I was sad because I thought you didn't like it (had a mini heart attack haha) but then I saw your other comment. Thank-you very much!! :D
citydreamer citydreamer Jul 11, 2012 09:28AM
@MarineLynn Yeap, that's the fantasy part, because if all stories were realistic they would be boring.. (: