I thought myself to be terribly unlucky, but I didn't think the bad luck was this bad! I mean, it's not every day that your boyfriend is a blood sucking monster... right?!
This is amazing. It's just amazing that's the only word that I can say when reading it. Great work!
Damn she has a BMW!? *wants* And reading the part about the pancakes didn't help me much considering I'm awfully hungry right now... and for pancakes after reading that. XD
And she is accident prone! LOL Running into walls even, but at least she ran into something nice, right? -_~
i love it. i could tell from the beggining i would. it's well written, i like the plot and i'm getting a very clear visual. keep up the good work.